Monday, October 17, 2011

problem after problem after problem!

I appoligize! First the internet, then my flashdrive, then when I finally get home and I get on the house computer my dad was like "We had a virus..had to wipe the whole system. What ever you saved isn't on there anymore." I was quite upset. I had to start my paper ALL over again and it's STILL not done. I want to cry. Stressed out is a very good word for how I feel today.

Anyway here is the first paragraph. What is it about?


If Lucretia Mott and Gloria had not been told they couldn’t, would they still have done what they did? Would we, women, have the rights we have now? Probably not. It’s because these woman are different in their ways but very similar that we have our rights. They aren’t as ‘perfect’ as we would like them to be but we can’t be picky. We still don’t get equal pay to a man. But we have all else. We are treated different sometimes but that’s kind of understandable. Women are very different from men. These ladies had something to fight for and felt strong about and they ran with it.
<--my mood

3 comments:

  1. I think that you first paragraph of your paper is about the differnces between men and women. Also, comparing and contrasting the two documents on women's issues.

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  2. I think it will discuss ways in which men and women are different from one another. I also think you will be finding the similiarities and differences on the topic of women's rights.

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  3. I think your paper will be how women like Lucretia and Mott fought to have equal rights for women dispute on how hard that might be to accomplish.

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